Homework Foundation_Ielts Writing Task 1_Table
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009.

 

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A. Overview

a. Order: Community schools became the most popular kind of secondary school.

b. Trend:

+ Community schools experienced a marked increase.

+ Schools of specialist, Grammar, and Voluntary-controlled saw a corresponding decline

B. Body

a. Body 1: In 2000:

+ more than half of the secondary students attended voluntary-controlled schools - the highest figure

+ The percentage of pupils attending grammar schools – ranked second – doubling that of specialist and community schools.

b. Body 2: 2005 - 2009

+ the community schools’ students – skyrocketed à the most popular school type

+ voluntary-controlled schools: the enrollment dropped substantially to 20% in 2009

+ the figures for specialist and grammar schools decreased to 12% and 10%, respectively.

C. Writing

The table illustrates the percentage of secondary school students enrolled in four distinct types of secondary schools over a 9-year period, starting from 2000.

Overall, the figures for schools of specialist, Grammar, and Voluntary-controlled saw a corresponding decline, while the opposite was true for community school. Also, community schools became the most popular kind of secondary school in 2009.

In 2000, more than half of the secondary students attended voluntary-controlled schools, marking the highest figure on the list. Following this, the percentage of pupils attending grammar schools ranked second with 24%, doubling that of specialist and community schools.

After 5 years, the percentage of students admitted to community schools skyrocketed to 32%. It continued to follow an upward trend, reaching 58% in 2009, making it the most popular school type. The opposite trend can be observed in voluntary-controlled schools, where enrollment has dropped substantially, reaching 20% in 2009. Similarly, by the final year of the period, the figures for specialist and grammar schools decreased to 12% and 10%, respectively.
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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007.

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A. Overview

+ Japan’s rail transport served a larger population and covered more distance per person

+ The USA – led in transporting a substantial amount of cargo

B. Body

Body 1: Japan + USA:

Japan: highest number of people using rail – 27 million – had the longest passenger kilometres per head of population - 1,980 kilometers

USA: lowest figure for rail commuters – 0.3 million –had the smallest average distance traveled per person – led in cargo transportation – 2,820 billion tons

Body 2: UK + Italy

Similar figures: transported over 5 million people – shipped around 22 billion tons of cargo

Slight difference: average distance traveled per head of population – 775 kilometers

C. Writing

The table provides information about railway transit in four nations in the year 2007.

Overall, it is evident that Japan’s rail transport served a larger population and covered more distance per person compared to other countries. Conversely, the USA led in transporting a substantial amount of cargo.

Japan stood out as the country with the highest number of people using rail transport, reaching 27 million individuals. Moreover, this country also boasted the longest average distance of rail travel per individual, at 1,980 kilometers. In contrast, the USA had the lowest figure for rail commuters, with only 0.3 million people, and also ranked at the bottom for the

smallest average distance traveled per person. Notably, the USA took the lead in cargo transportation, with approximately 2,820 billion tons, a significant contrast to other nations.

Turning to the UK and Italy, the railway systems in these two countries reported very similar figures in 2007. Both countries transported well over 5 million people, and there was only a slight difference in the average distance traveled per head of population, with an average of 775 kilometers. Additionally, both nations shipped approximately 22 billion tons of cargo.
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